9.23.08 Class Critique

PHEW, my video critique did not go that bad, I was so nervous coming to class!!! Someone actually mentioned that they like they was I had shown how 13,000,000 is such a large number that it actually is more than several states populations put together. YES!! My message was explained back to me, which I am hoping means it was understood!! I still feel it is boring compared to many others in class, what do you think!

There are little things that needed to be changed such as the -OR- separating the adding of states. It was mentioned to change it to lower case letters because I am using the abbreviations of the states and that is the same as Oregon.
- the website is a .org rather than. com.
- use some kind of clicking noise for the numbered parts...data like sounds
- "Not voting at all comes on" should take the place of the states because that is where you are already looking.
- a couple of transitions need to be a little faster (red guy growing)

Please if there is anything else that is noticed while watching let me know!!!!